Wednesday, May 6, 2009

The conjoined poetry of Amanda Rose & Sophia Faye(:

hiyaa. this is a combined poem, by Amanda Rose && Sophia Faye
[:!
we're the best poets everrr [XD] && combined we rule the world, every 5 feet at a time...
so here it is, the untitled poem by the shortest people around[: !

the pictures blur
while walls close me in
our rights are disconnected
asking: can i survive this pain?
happiness is in the air
yet it is out of my grasp
no matter how much i try
to reach that simple thing
i will always be close
but never all the way there
so all my life i will wait
as it floats just above my head
why do i care anymore?
is it true, do i care?
always there, never close
the hope of happiness
the happiness of hope.

1 comment:

  1. I love the last five or six lines

    The only problem with this poem is that it starts talking about one thing and ends with a completely different thing. It's lacking connection.

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