Saturday, May 16, 2009

Another poem with a mirror

this is my first attempt at a non-rhyming , non- four line poem. its hard! sorry it probably stinks. I just put random lines together. here it is:

 she lost her self
doesn't know who she is 

A look in the mirror
reveals a face 
she does not own

what has she done?
what lies did she said?
why did she let it go this far? 

All those she has hurt
were the ones who cared the most

the unknown face 
now smiles at her

she says 
i want to go back

the face says
its to late now

you are me 
i am you

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