[i feel like a loser i'm the only one who ever looks at this damn blog!]
OHMYGOD AMANDA I WROTE MY FIRST RHYMING POEM! i showed it to you today at the ii party!
i guess i'll post it. i'd rather not. i must go find it in my planner...
its like your poems, amanda. she dies in the end!
bleh we depressed people(: cept not really. haha otay here it is..../:
she walks alone along a shell-less beach
her thoughts are gone
she still can't speak
nothing happens
everything is still
there's not much time she has left to kill
she has ties in her hair
as it blows in the breeze
she has tears in her eyes that nobody sees
there's no one around
for her to cry to
there's no one on earth who knows wut is true
as she climbs up the height, it drives her insane
when she finally drops, she can let go of her pain.
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ha ha. niceeeee
ReplyDeleteand i my last couple of poems have been depressing but no one dies.
=)
WHOOOOOOO [:!
ReplyDeletewe're gradually un-depressifying youuuse(:
hahahha this poem sucksss i cant rhymee!!!
♥! shopstiee
Eh. Not so fond of the closing, but very good for your first rhyming poem.
ReplyDeleteYou are a very talented writer, shopstie