Ok, so i wrote this when i was in 5th? grade. It was the first poem i ever wrote (without being forced by a teacher) i think. The funny thing was, i thought it was amazing and i could like win a contest with it. HA HA i was young and happy back in the good old days. But now i look back at it and say... HA HA u suck! So without further due...
Mirror Mirror on the Wall
What do you show? Nothing At all
do you show the real me?
its a real mystery.
maybe you show the outside illusion of me.
do i even dare
to say that i dont care?
Mirror Mirror on the wall; what do you call?
Judgement, thats all.
**snap, snap, snap**
thats not bad dont be hard on yourrrselfff amandaaaaaa =DD
ReplyDeleteha ha ur the one with FOUR count it 1-2-3-4 comments/critics =D
ReplyDeleteI liked it ^^
ReplyDeleteand to make yours more post then sophia here.. XD
ReplyDeleteNow you have more!
ReplyDeleteyes!
ReplyDeletelmao
lmfao IM HURT
ReplyDeletejk ik mine sucks :PP
<3<3
it doesn't frickin stink did u read the above? geez, and im the one hard on my self.
ReplyDeletelmao yes you are. you are every day!
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